

4A2
葉禮賢
Ip Lai Yin
Travelling
Last Christmas, I travelled to Japan Hokkaido we joined a six-day five-night package through Hong Kong travel agency. We went by plane and the flight time was about 5 hours from Hong Kong to Hokkaido.
Hokkaido is famous for its view. We woke up early every day so that we could see the beautiful snow outside the window.
At the beginning of the trip, we went to Maruyama Park. We saw a lot of animals there. e.g. polar bears, monkeys. We saw the famous penguin parade! After we had lunch, we went to the souvenirs shop to buy a lot of clothes, dolls and food.
We went to Sahel Resort Ski Area for the following days. We went skating and sledding. I played snow and made a snowman with my little sister.
We stayed in Sapporo for the last two days. We had shabu shabu and went to a claw toy shop to play the games.
I enjoyed the trip very much and look forward to my next trip.
Teacher’s comment:
Great job! You include lots of details about your loop. The ideas are well-organized.

