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莊心予

Chong Sum Yue

Mystery Park

One day, I was walking through the park when I found a hidden garden, there were a lot of colorful flowers. The air was fragrant with their sweet scent, and I felt a sense of tranquility wash over me. As I explored further, I found a small pond shimmering in the sunlight, with ducks lazily gliding across the surface. In that serene moment, I sat on a nearby bench, listening to the gentle rustle of leaves and the distant laughter of children, feeling completely at peace. Suddenly woke up on my bed, realizing it was all a dream…

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Teacher’s comment:

Reading this JW, made me feel very relaxed. Great use of adjectives and vocabulary.

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