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Szeto Ho Isaac
Information about Hong Kong Space Museum
Hong Kong Space Museum is known for being the first local planetarium for the popularization of astronomy and space science. It is recognizable for its unique egg-shaped dome.
The Hong Kong Space Museum is famous for boasting the first OMNIMAX film projector located in the eastern hemisphere. It is also the first planetarium in the world to possess a fully automatic control system to air Sky Shows, OMNIMAX films and 3D Dome shows.
Hong Kong Space Museum is at 10 Salisbury Rd, Tsim Sha Tsui, Hong Kong. Mr. Joseph Ming Gun Lee was the chief architect for the construction of Hong Kong Space Museum. The construction started in 1977, and it was opened in October 1980. Hong Kong Space Museum changed a bit by adding regular disinfection and alcohol hand sanitizers.
Based on Hong Kong Space Museum reviews, most people think that Hong Kong Space Museum is very good. People should visit Hong Kong Space Museum because it is for the popularization of astronomy and space science.
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