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伍彥僑
Ng Yin Kiu Milton
Max's Picnic Day
Last Saturday afternoon, the weather was hot and sunny. Max’s family decided to have a picnic on May Park. They brought their favourite foods for their picnic. They brought bananas, sweet red apples, 7 juicy hot dogs, a pack of chocolate chip cookies and some orange sour soda. Once they got to May Park, they started eating because they were very hungry. While they were enjoying eating, a cheeky hairy monkey jumped and swung from the tree and take the apples and bananas away. Max’s father was angry and chased the monkey, it’s time for Max’s father versus cheeky monkey. Max’s father had an idea and did some scary noise. The monkey ignored the noises and kept running. After 2 minutes, Max’s father threw some rocks forward, the monkey was scared and he gave up his bananas and apples. Max’s father ran back to meet the family. They ate happily. Hope there is no more monkey business!
Miss Sarah’s comment:
Milton, awesome detail and plot to this story. You added detail and the way Max’s dad got the food back.