Szeto Ho Issac
Susan and the Robot Cat
Last Sunday, Susan went to a toy shop because she wanted to buy a new robot cat. After buying the robot cat, she went home to play with it. She loved the robot cat so much.
On Monday morning, Susan really liked the robot cat, so she decided to bring it to school. While she was focusing in English lesson, the robot cat jumped out of her bag and ran out of the class. The teacher caught it and asked Susan why she brought it to school. Susan replied that she just really liked the robot cat. The teacher advised Susan that even though she liked it, she shouldn’t bring it to school.
Finally, the teacher gave it back to Susan. Susan learned a lesson.
Hi Issac, your writing about the robot is good and fluent. I especially like the happy ending!