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4A3
曹景淳
Cao Jingchun Jake
The Beach
My favourite place is the beach near my home. The sand is as warm as a cozy blanket and the sea water is like a cool jelly. I can see small fish swimming around my ankles. The seashells are like hairclips and make my sand castle look gorgeous. The sunset is like a piece of rainbow cake that I can eat all day! The sea breeze is as fresh as a mint candy and every moment here makes me feel as happy as a kid opening a new toy.
Teacher’s comment:
Great descriptions! You used similes very well!
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