

5A4
童嘉樹
Tong Jiashu
My Change
My life changes a lot in the past and in the present. There are differences in living habits and ways of learning.
For living habits, when I was a preschooler, I used to take a nap at noon because if I did not take a nap, I would be very tired. Now I do not sleep at noon because I study in school. I used to eat snacks because I did not know snacks are not healthy. Now, I eat more healthy food, such as apples, milk, bananas… I used to play with friends in kindergarten because I didn’t have a lot of homework. Now, I play with friends mostly in the weekend because I am busier than the time when I was a preschooler.
For ways of learning, when I was a preschooler, I used to go to classes to play games, draw, talk because we were in the kindergarten. I used to observe how my mum handled different things.
Now, I learn writing, reading and other knowledge. I do not always just learn by observing because I can talk with others if I have questions.
I like my life now because the life is more fulfilling. I can learn more things in my life.
Teacher’s comment:
The ideas are organised very well.
The use of vocabulary is also very good.
Good job Avery!

