

5A3
李伊菡
Li Yihan
My Change
My life changes a lot in the past and in present. There are also a big difference in my activities and living habits.
When I was a toddler, I used to play hide-and-seek with my mom because I was bored, and my mom wanted to play with me. I used to play with my dolls because the dolls were soft, and I liked how I felt. I also used to communicate with my parents using body gestures because I have not learnt how to speak and pronounce the words.
Now, I play a video games because I think hide-and-seek is not fun anymore. I also can speak a good language with my parents.
My living habits also change. When I was a baby, I used to drink milk in every meals and my mum fed me because I was young. I needed to sleep in my mom’s room sleeping in the crib. I needed to drink milk in the midnight. It was convenient for my mom to take care of me.
Now, I can eat a lot of food instead of just drinking milk because I know how to bite food. I can also sleep by myself in my own room because I no longer need to drink milk in the midnight and I can take care of myself.
I enjoy my life every day but I like my life in the past most because there were many things I could do and I did not feel bored.
Teacher’s comment:
The ideas are shared very well in good sentence structures and vocabulary.
Good job Candy!

