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6A2

譚靖瑤

Tam Ching Yiu

Saving Sant

The alert came over the radio: “Breaking news! Santa Claus is stuck in a chimney, Christmas might be delayed!” Oh no… I thought. I loved Christmas since I was born, we can’t have Christmas delayed! We need to go save him! I asked my friend Kat to help me save Santa.

We went to the location last tracked from the radio. When we arrived, surprisingly, there was no one willing to save Santa, how sad. We saw Santa faced-down, stuck in the chimney. I think he was going to go in to deliver presents but he was too fat and got stuck, Poor Santa! We quickly used our hands to try and pull him out but it wasn’t working. So, we found more people to come and help. “I think we should go in the house and may be try pulling him downwards instead of pulling him up?” Kat said. We all agreed and went inside.

Then, we found him upside down but… his face was blue and he wasn’t breathing! Oh no… Christmas is not only delayed, Christmas might not have Santa anymore!

Everyone stared in shock and horror. We dialed 999 and told them that Santa needed emergency help and assistance. They rushed over in five minutes. They led Santa on a stretcher and brought him to the emergency room. We came after them.

They put on oxygen mask on him and started helping. We prayed Santa would be fine and safe and sound. After two hours, the doctor came out and told us Santa was dead…. They couldn’t save him, even if they could, he would have suffered brain damage.

At the end, I guess Christmas was canceled after all, maybe forever…

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Teacher’s comment:

Oh no….Santa! Great job Kate! Very well written! Keep going!

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