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4A1
葉子謙
Yip Tsz Him
The Missing Violin
One day, after a violin lesson, Terry was bored and did not want to go home. So, Terry went to a nearby park. In the park, he saw a stray dog. Terry and the stray dog played happily, until when Terry went to the toilet. When Terry went back to the park, the violin was missing.
Terry searched around the park but there was no sign of it. Terry was sad and worried because his dead grandma gave it to him. So, sadly he went back home. Few days later, grandpa Rick gave it to him. It turns out the stray dog was grandpa Rick’s and so Terry happily played the violin.
Teacher’s comment:
That was a surprise! I love how you try to include detail and creative ideas into your writing!
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