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黎卓欣
Lai Cheuk Yan Sonia
The Hamsters' Revenge
Once upon a time, there was a group of hamsters who lived in a cave. One day, a big bad cat saw the cave and took over the cave, so the hamsters had to find a new home. They searched everywhere but they can’t find a new house. They walked across a forest and saw a strange plant that grew strange fruit.
The hamsters ate the fruit because they were very hungry. Suddenly, they grew bigger and bigger until they touched the sky.
The hamsters went back to the cave and kicked away the big bad cat. Then the hamsters returned to their normal size, took back their home and lived happily ever after.
Teacher’s Comment
This was a fun story! I liked imaging the giant hamsters. It would be nice if you described the plant and fruit more.