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4A1

彭浩銘

Pang Ho Ming

Terry's Violin


Last Saturday was a sunny day. Terry went to the park with his dog because he was bored. He put his violin on a bench and played fetch with his dog.

In the afternoon, Terry urgently needed to go to the restroom, so he left his violin in the park. When he returned, he discovered that his violin had disappeared. Terry felt upset and asked people in the park if they had seen it. Unfortunately, no one had.

Terry was worried because his grandma had given him the violin as a birthday gift when he was four years old. He searched for a long time but couldn’t find it.

Luckily, the next day, a park keeper found the violin on a slide. The park keeper returned it to Terry, who felt relieved and cried joyfully. He vowed that he would never lose it again.

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Teacher’s comment:

You have done a good job writing beginning, middle and ending with interesting ideas!

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