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譚靖瑤
Tam Ching Yiu Kate
Stray Dog
Last Saturday, my dad asked if we wanted to go barbecue. I said yes because I felt bored and hungry.
When we got there, my mom was preparing the food. I brought a lot of food, including my favourite corn and steak. I loved going to barbecue. It is always a fun experience.
We cooked the corn first, then the meatballs. My mom’s handbag was beside her on the chair. While we were cooking, there was a stray dog that came up and took the bag secretly.
After the dog took the bag, my mom noticed and she was scared. We were terrified we would never get it back.
In the end, Dad chased after the dog because Mom was scared it would bite her, so she stayed with me. Eventually, Dad got it back and Mom was so happy!
Teacher’s comment:
Great effort, great start! Good use of connectives, adjectives and vocabulary!