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黎珀希
Lai Pak Hei Hailey
Fun Holiday
This Easter holiday, I went to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in China with my mum and sister for a 3-day trip. We went there because we wanted to enjoy the holiday.
On the first day, I went to the hotel called Chimelong Spaceship Hotel. It was beautiful. The bathrooms were very clean and tidy. The hotel service made me feel relaxed. I had a wonderful peace of mind for the whole night. Next morning, I went to see the ocean creatures. I saw a giant whale swimming around in the big tank. I have never seen it before. I was super surprised to see it.
On the next day, I ate a lot of delicious food. I ate 4 cups of ice cream, a box of popcorn and a pink dragon looking jelly. I also bought a fluffy whale keychain and a set of pajamas.
After spending two days at the ocean kingdom, we went to the other side of the hotel. There were riding games, such as roller coasters. I rode on over 4 roller coasters. After, we slept at the hotel for the last night. Then, it was time to go back to Hong Kong.
I was a bit upset to leave the ocean kingdom, but that was already the second time I went there. However, I still wanted to visit once more to enjoy the happiness again in the near future.
Teacher’s comment:
Hailey, magnificent details describing your 3 Day Trip to Chimelong. Great detail and use of grammar. Challenge yourself further with vocabulary. Perhaps use a thesauny.