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郭曉澄
Kwok Hiu Ching Abbie
The Magical Hamster
Once upon a time, there was a girl who was called Chloe. She had a hamster. She lived in a village. Her cottage had six star shaped windows, pink doors, two bedrooms, two living rooms, a bathroom and a roof. Her garden had apple trees, orange trees, lemon trees, some roses and one magical rainbow flower.
One day Chloe saw that her hamster had disappeared and there was a letter in her cottage. The letter said, “I have taken your hamster and I put it into an x-ray machine and the machine said it was a magical hamster. And the hamster can change into a hamster person. If you want to get back your hamster, you have to trade your magical rainbow flower to me and meet me at 11 o’clock in the middle of the night in your garden two days later.”
Chloe thought for a moment and said, “I will trade my magical rainbow flower that can teleport you to anywhere you want four times.”
Two days later, Chloe woke up at 11 o’clock and went out of the bedroom into the garden. She saw a tall witch holding her hamster. She was shocked, but she still said, “I will trade you my magical rainbow flower. If you eat one pedal you can teleport. However you cannot eat more than one.” The witch said, “Good, but please give that flower to me right now!” Chloe immediately picked the flower and handed it to the witch. Then the witch returned the hamster to Chloe and went back to the factory with the flower. When she was alone in the factory, she was greedy and she didn’t follow the instruction so she ate two pedals. Suddenly, she was teleported to a cage which was locked. She wanted to eat another pedal to escape, but she was shocked to find that the flower was vanished. The witch was locked there forever.
Chloe didn’t know what happened to the witch but noticed that there was a button on the hamster’s tummy. She pressed it and the hamster became a hamster person. They became best friends and lived together happily.
Teacher’s comment:
Wow, cool story. A cute hamster person. This story had lots of excitement!