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Tang Ching Tung, Ellie
Max’s Picnic
Max and his family went to a picnic at May Park last Sunday Morning. It was a hot and sunny day. Max’s mom brought a lot of Max’s favourite food like apples, bananas, cookies, hot dogs and orange juice. When they were enjoying their food, a monkey suddenly jumped onto the picnic table and scared Max and his mom. The naughty and hungry monkey stole one apple and a bunch of bananas and ran away quickly. Max’s money was gone and Max’s father chased after the monkey. Running along the park, the monkey stumbled on a log and fell badly. The monkey was frightened and gave up the fruits, Max’s dad got the fruits and enjoyed with his family. They had a good time in the park.
Miss Sarah’s comment:
Ellie, magnificent story about the cheeky and clumsy monkey. Great plot.