6A1
麥以恩
Ian Mak
Travelling
It was the last family trip before the outbreak of Covid-19 in 2019. We visited different places in France but my favourite city was Paris. I spent a few days with my parents and my brother in Paris.
Coffee shops were everywhere in Paris. On the street, many people had cup of coffee in their hands. They loved drinking coffee and reading books at the same time. But I could only drink chocolate milk at that time, so I didn’t know the flavour of coffee in Paris. However, I ate some yummy food there, I liked croissant and macaron the most. Both were freshy made and super delicious.
There were many tourist attractions in Paris. I went to Eiffel Tower. When I saw the real one, it was bigger than I thought. I took photos there, it was so beautiful! I also held a picnic and played on meadow with my family too. The second tourist attraction was Louvre. Many people visited Louvre to learn more about the history of the world but I was too young to understand the history so I just took photos there and ate ice-cream.
I felt happy and excited because I tried so many new things and food in this trip. As we had a lot of luggage so we only bought Paris magnets but we still took many photos in the trip which recalled our good memories in Paris. It was the best trip ever!
Teacher’s Comment:
You’re a very wonderful “travel blog” writer, Ian! You make great choices of expressions and you have a good sense in grammar. I enjoy reading your work!