Last Sunday afternoon was a sunny day. Max’s parents did not need to work. Max decided to have some fresh air. So they went on a picnic at May Park. They brought a lot of food for their picnic. There are some red apples, yummy banana, ten long hot dogs, five buttery cookies and a jar of orange juice. Suddenly, a fat monkey with dark brown fur and a pair of big eyes jumped on the table. Max’s family were extremely scared. They could not say anything for a second. The naughty monkey took away a red apple and three yummy bananas. It made Max’s family so angry and upset. Max’s dad tried to get back the food. However, he failed the mission. The monkey climbed the tree and enjoyed the food. Max said,” It’s alright! We still have lots to eat.” They had picnic until six o’clock. And they went home happily. They had a good holiday.
Miss Sarah’s comment: Impressive, Denice! You are a creative writer! Excellent detail and use of words. I really appreciate reading this. I’ll read it to baby Rylie as a bedtime story.