I like my balcony. My balcony has a lot of plants on it. My favourite plant is the Venus flytrap - its leaves are like big mouths. My second favourite plant is pitcher plant, whose shape is like a jug. The succulent plants are as beautiful as flowers. Last year, my mom planted a watermelon, and it grew as big as a basketball. We tasted it and it was juicy. My mom also likes to plant tomatoes. They come in red, yellow and green colors, like a traffic light. I really enjoy my plants and my balcony.

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Great use of similes when you write about your balcony, Yue Tong!