Li Ho Nin
Someone’s Coming Homing
The phone rang. “Hello, “ I said. No one was there. I hung up. All the lights went out…
At that moment, I felt pale and was horrified! I tip-toed down to my parents and switched on the lights. They were terrified as well, we quickly got an axe and rushed up to my room to hide.
We hid at the corner of my bed and were preparing to counter attack. We thought it might be a surprise joke! But it wasn’t.
Finally, a man knocked on the door and told us that the power supply was cut off and the network was damaged.
Your story would be even more interesting and complete if it continued a little longer! But good attempt, Ho Ho!