My friend’s name is Carrie Li. She is nine years old. She studies at Funful Primary School. She is taller than me and her eyes are bigger than mine. She is kind and helpful. She always helps me solve different problems. She likes cats very much because they are lovely. I like cats too. We play together with her cat on Sundays. I like her because we have think in similar ways. We both like to play the piano and we sometimes play a duet together. We feel happy when we have fun with each other.
Miss Lok’s Comments:
You grammar is accurately used and you’ve put very brief and clear details that enable me to imagine how Carrie is like. Good job!