Chan Hei Christopher
My Sister Cassie
Cassie is one of my favourite relatives. She is my elder sister. She doesn’t live with us in Kowloon Tong but she comes to my home for dinner. She has a pottery workshop in her house. I went to her workshop once.
She has a round face with long hair. She goes running every week. She looks serious but she is friendly. She is good at playing the guitar and Jazz drums.
I like her because she is kind to me and she always plays board games and card games with me.
Miss Lok’s Comments:
Wow, you have an artistic and nice sister! Show her this passage to let her know how much you like her, Christopher!! 😊
Your foundation of grammar is really good. Make use of that more and write more wonderful pieces. 😊