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潘芷悠

Poon Chi Yau Yolette

My Rainbow Sky Castle


My dream house is up in the sky. It is on a pig cloud. It is a rainbow castle. I get to my castle by elevator. There is a brown lift tower that connects earth to my sky castle. First, there are three floors to my castle. Then there are six windows and one door. On the top floor of my castle, there is my princess room. I love to play with my family in my castle.

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Ms. Sarah’s Comments:

Yolette, you’re a great writer! Excellent sentences and details. I’d really like to live in your Rainbow Sky Castle!