Chiu Yuet Yuki

Mars Mission Gone Wrong

Five days ago, I was sent to the cold Mars to study the creatures who live there. Unfortunately, when I landed, my space bike ran out of gas and needed a day to recharge. That’s how my day on Mars began…

At first, I felt really scared to be stuck on an unfamiliar planet. Then I realized, there was nothing to be scared of! Because the creatures who lived there were kind and generous. They built a small cottage using an alien with strong atlers on its head and lent me some cosmo cakes, spaceberries and Mars apples to eat. When it was time for dinner, the aliens invited me to have their special dish of squash berries in delightful noodles. It was the most delicious thing I have ever tasted in my life!

After dinner, I played hide and catch with the small aliens and flew on alicorns! Finally, it was time to leave. My space bike was recharged and ready to go. Before leaving, I promised my alien friends I will visit them someday!

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Miss Lee’s Comments:

Great plot and good use of language! Good job, Yuki!