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陳學言

Chan Hok Yin Aiden

My Dream House

My dream house is in the ocean. My house is dry and cold. It is made of all kinds of strong things. My strong house is made of metal and rocks. It is silver, grey and brown. There are five rooms. There is a living room, bathroom, bedroom, kitchen and a reading room. My house is special because you can breath under water. I love watching the fishes when I am happy.

Miss Onki’s Comments:

Great writing, lots of cool ideas!  Wow, such an awesome dream house! 