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Cheung Ching Yin

A Show in Tsim Sha Tsui


Last night, when my family finished eating dinner, we walked along the Victoria Harbour.

Soon, we saw a band singing and playing guitars and drums. Their songs were lovely. People were enjoying listening to the band. Suddenly three youngsters came next to the band. They danced and played music. The band stopped because their music was too loud. Everyone was unhappy. Someone turned off the speaker. The band and all the audiences went to another place and continued their show.

Today, the whole thing was broadcasted on the TV show. The three youngsters looked embarrassed. I hope this would not happen again.

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Ms Fung’s comment :

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